Stupid Heroines:
Please don't make your heroine DO STUPID THINGS FOR THE
PURPOSE OF
TELLING THE STORY. I really hate STUPID
HEROINES. If something menacing
happened to you and you would logically contact or go to
the police, then
your heroine WOULD DO THE SAME. Just because she
goes to the police doesn't
mean the police have to believe her sad little tale of
woe. Or, if they do
believe her, how much protection can they really
offer? Usually little to
none. Which suits our purposes as it makes her even
more vulnerable to the
bad guy(s), scares the reader for her and keeps that
reader reading to find
out what happens next.
But if she doesn't go to the police, the reader will
wonder why and
you'll have them disliking her, thinking her "TOO
STUPID TO LIVE." And that
your precious book may end up a wall banger.
I've read some otherwise great romantic suspense
books that have had
characters doing things no smart woman would be caught
doing. (A couple
were written by men.) In real life, women are
cautious. We're alert to
dangers and strangers. We need to be to survive in
this world. We aren't
stupid. Or foolish.
A book I read recently had a heroine whose apartment was
broken into
by a man who blindfolded her, stripped her, and all but
raped her.
Afterward, she changed the lock on her front door, but
not the one on her
sliding glass door. HELLO!!!!!!!!!! Who
doesn't know that a sliding glass
door is the most vulnerable one? Who wouldn't have
had that lock changed,
bolts set in the top and bottom and probably a steel bar
inserted in the
runner? What woman living in Los Angeles-which the
character was-wouldn't
already have had those safety precautions? And what
woman would ever feel
safe in that apartment again? Not me, that's for
sure.
If your heroine must live in a dangerous part of town for
your
story purposes, then don't have her quirky personality
trait be to leave her
windows and doors unlocked, even though she's on the
second or third floor.
(Yes, I read that in a book by a best selling romantic
suspense author)
Instead, make that bad guy get into her apartment despite
her
safeguards. "THAT" is scarier. The
author with the glass door scenario
later in the book had the bad guy watching another
woman's house and saying
to himself that he could see 17 ways in from where he
stood. 17 ways. Now
THAT is scary. And it teaches us something.
The smarter your heroine is
and the more logically she behaves and the harder she
works at keeping
herself safe, the more frightening it will be that none
of her safeguards
work to protect her. The reason this is so scary is
because it shows us all
our own vulnerabilities and it touches on all of our
deepest fears.
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